I had my college interview today, and I want to send a thank you e-mail to the alumni. English is not my first language, and I came up with this:
Thank you for taking the time to interview me for [college name]! You really helped me through my first interview by putting me at ease. I appreciate learning more about the student life, class requirements, and what to expect there. You were also so helpful in answering all of my questions.
I am strongly considering going to [college name] if I am accepted. I love how it offers a large number of courses and encourages students to enroll in them from a variety of areas.
Thank you again for your time and the opportunity.
I’m not pretty confident with my last sentence in the 2nd paragraph. Does it sound awkward, is there a better way to word it?