The Activity Essay - Can someone please proof read for me?

Colleges & Universities Yale University
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<p>Hey everyone, I just wrote my Yale activity essay and I think its pretty good so far. Can anyone edit/proofread it please.
thanks, i can either PM or E-mail it.
Sorry for not posting it … you know its kinda scary to just post it on the internet, i hope you can understand.
Thanks</p>

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<p>anyone…</p>

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<p>PM me if u want</p>

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<p>sure. would greatly appreciate it if you could look at my essay, too. PM me.</p>

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<p>send to both of you
thanks</p>

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<p>ill read it, if u want.</p>

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<p>can i read it for the hell of it?..i like reading people’s essays.</p>

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<p>Feedback sent =)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, and if you could read mine too once I’m done I’d appreciate it. PM me also.</p>

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<p>I’ll help proofread. *<a href="mailto:myccusername@gmail.com">myccusername@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>send to all</p>

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<p>chidimma, i like your email address!
someone i know used to be <a href=“mailto:thatgirlfromschool@”>thatgirlfromschool@</a>…</p>

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<p>oh, um that’s clever, but I meant <a href="mailto:chidimma@gmail.com">chidimma@gmail.com</a> heh :)</p>

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<p>i’m so smart…;)</p>

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<p>PM to me if you need more input :)</p>

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<p>feedback-ed</p>

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<p>Feel free to PM me or drop me an email with your essay on.</p>

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