Would anyone be willing to critique my essay? I’d love to be able to get some opinions on what you liked/didn’t like or what I should change. This would be for my common app, but I’m not quite sure what prompt I’m responding to yet so if you have any suggestions as to which prompt it best fits I’d love to hear them. Thanks!
I’d love to have a look 
would you like me to only critique its content or also give you grammar suggestions?
@SenChihiro Either would be great! I’ll PM you with a link
I can look at it if you’d like another opinion ^^
I can take a look if you want