<p>I am writing about my continuing fascination with the supernatural, parapsychology, and ki.</p>
<p>I have two essays and I’m trying to end it in a “we should try to open minded not only to certain things, but also to things that cannot be concretely explained” note. (If you want to read, I’d be glad to show it to you borrowing the power of anonymity. Although I am not finished, I need unbiased feedback… does one sound better than the other, or should I give both of them up?)</p>
<p>I’m wondering if I sound crazy. I’m kinda afraid to show to people for critiques LOL I really want to use it but I’m really testy. but will the admissions officers think I’m bonkers or hopefully just eccentric?</p>