<p>Just a little advice even though I am new to this whole thing, there is no way on earth I would ever post, or private message a random person my app essay. I know that most people here are respectable, but even respectable people have the tendancy to use something for themselves that would benefit them. So, if you are a really great writer (like myself) you should value the opinion of trained writers and trusted people only, not random undergraduates. Never ever ever ever post or send an essay to anyone other than your university peer mentor (which you should have if your serious about writing a good essay) a writing center rep, or a close family member. Would you want some of your content showing up on other peoples apps only to get denied? Don’t trust anyone. Ever. </p>
<p>Ustedes deber trabajan un anos prelimentar tambien (you should have been working on it a year in advance also) If you have not done at least 20 revisions, your essay is not ready. Why? Because if you dont have 4.0s and landscapes of extra curriculars, or student club experience, or sports experience, or leadership experience, or work experience…then your essay is literally EVERYTHING. You essay can actually get you in single handedly. I knew a transfer student who had a 3.1 GPA, no work experience, no clubs, no leadership, barley any volunteer hours and she got into UCLA because her essay was epic, it was genius. Spend time on your essay and it will pay dividends.</p>