This essay is the one that you should grade because...

<p>…well I’m not sure why, but I’d really appreciate it if you could grade this =D. Even a number will be more than helpful. Thanks!</p>

<p>Prompt:

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<p>Essay:

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<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>Have a number!</p>

<p>5~</p>

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<li>work on your conclusion. It’s super short, and not very “ideological” </li>
<li>don’t do contractions (Revolution’s = revolution is); don’t ask, just do</li>
<li>Don’t say “I strongly agree with blab” just say “blab”. It’s more persuasive</li>
<li>Good sentence structures and rhetorical questions. Work on diction</li>
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<p>Hope that helps…? =D</p>

<p>Thanks for the input, that definitely helped =). Yeah, the conclusion was reallly rushed cause I had 15 seconds left when I finished the final body paragraph, so I scribbled something down for the conclusion >.>.</p>