<p>would anybody be willing to read my supplement? the issue i’m worried about is my focus, because i feel like i honed in too much on my interest in the subjects/field that i want to pursue (psychology and anthropology) rather than why i want to attend the school itself…</p>
<p>You can send it to me and I’ll take a look. I kind of did something similar, I actually broke it up into a few sections that flowed together pretty well. First I described why U-M personally inspired me. Next I described the specific program that I was interested in and the clubs that inspire me there. I finished off with my thoughts on U-M’s approach to veterans since I will be one when I attend. I didn’t focus on the school much except the programs they offered and extracurriculars, but definitely went into detail about all those.</p>
<p>PM me; I can take a look.</p>