<p>My college admissions essay is roughly 580 words and I’m interested in hearing some opinions on it before it cull anything or add more to it. It’s a second draft, so there shouldn’t be many mistakes in syntax or mechanics.</p>
<p>It doesn’t use any particular prompt, courtesy of the common app. I appreciate any feedback!</p>
<p>Gone through for a third draft; anyone interested in mercilessly tearing this apart?</p>
<p>i’ll read it, but i’m a '14er also. But I am applying to Dartmouth so if this doesnt interfere with you i’d be happy to!</p>
<p>if you want to, you can email it to me as an attachment- <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a>
and i’ll take a look and give you my comments!</p>
<p>PM me, I will critique it</p>
<p>email to <a href="mailto:dearwarren@hotmail.com">dearwarren@hotmail.com</a> if you want critque</p>
<p>Send it to my e-mail and I’ll give you a peer review.
I’ll focus more on the nit-picky stuff like rephrasing things, expanding, leaving something out, ect, rather than challenging the actual ideas you’ve picked.</p>
<p><a href=“mailto:NKunkel@ucsd.edu”>NKunkel@ucsd.edu</a></p>