Thoughts on my essay?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>It’s unique, but 88 words over the limit… I am applying to Yale, Notre Dame, WashU, UVa, Tulane, and Illinois Urbana-Champaign for architecture. If y’all have any feedback AT ALL, it’s greatly appreciated, especially on how to shorten it! Thanks</p>

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<p>I will try to help! Pm me!</p>

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<p>I can help! I am a sophomore at harvard</p>