<p>In the context of the following sentence:
Please do not be aggravated by his bad manners since he is merely trying to attract attention. </p>
<p>aggravated is considered to be a diction error; irritated should be used instead. Can someone clarify this and perhaps provide a list of more diction errors I’m likely to encounter? </p>
<p>I’m getting them from Barron’s Practice Exam #3. </p>
<p>NOTE: Prior to joining CC, I got the commercial books–so I at least want to “use them” for the sake that I bought them. Then, I believe that standardized exams would be like AP exams so I ended up getting books from all 3 major companies. </p>
<p>In the near future, as in 2 weeks from now, Direct Hits and Erica Meltzers Grammar Guide should arrive. Meanwhile, I’m sampling as many different types of questions just for a start.</p>
<p>A major cause of stress in school is (where seniors must manage not only academic requirements and sports schedules, but also) standardized testing and college applications, during the first semester.</p>
<p>Well we know that ‘where’ doesn’t fit the logic of the sentence…nor can ‘when’ because those indicate places/times… not the actual ‘stress’ itself. </p>
<p>e) is wrongly stating: the management of seniors OF NOT ONLY ACADEMIC REQUIRES AND SPORTSCHEDULES (describing WHICH KIND OF seniors), where it should just be the management of seniors alone</p>
<p>B is the only choice left that is logical in a sense of describing the seniors responsible for management of both requirements and schedules…</p>
<p>sorry if it was confusing but I tried to make it as clear as possible</p>
<p>@tau628
The term ‘based’ is used in occasions where things are being stated statistically…
where as using ‘because of’ is logical itself… BECAUSE something happened… so and so was the outcome</p>
<p>Also, can someone explain coordination and subordination in terms of this sentence:</p>
<p>The swimmer (has established) an (enviable) (record, and it) probably will not (be broken) during the next 50 years. (No error)</p>
<p>The book (Barron’s–last practice test) says that “record, and it” is wrong due to an error in subordination and coordination; the sentence should have read
“record that”.</p>
<p>I did look up coordination and subordination in the sense of the arrangement of clauses but a little clarification would help. </p>