Tips for essay?

<p>This is the actual essay I wrote for the march sat, and it got a 10, I’m wondering what I should change to bump that up to a 12. I have dysgraphia which is why our friends at the ETS let me type it, but it’s also why the spelling is really bad. Any advice would be appreciated</p>

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<p>try to fill up all the spaces given. and i usually talk about literatures with merit such as Invisible Man, Handmaid’s tale, Crime and Punishment, The Sound and the Fury, and Heart of Darkness. I never got less than an 11 on sat essay and my writing skill is mediocre.</p>

<p>anyone else?</p>