<p>Can anyone think of a witty title concerning the personality traits of Mercutio from Romeo and Juliet?</p>
<p>Thanks</p>
<p>I think it depends on the essay that you write. Do you have something specifically witty in the intro or within the essay that you can tie into the title? I think it would sound weird if you had a witty title which didn’t fit into the essay.</p>
<p>Well, its about his wittiness, hot headedness, and superficiality. I had a Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde reference in the intro, referring to his clashing personality traits, but I’m not sure how to tie that into the title</p>
<p>Hm… maybe, “Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde: Shakespeare Invented Them First!”
Sorry, I’m really bad w/ titles…lol</p>
<p>^no offence, but I don’t like that. if it’s only something that is in your intro, and then you don’t mention it at all afterwards, it shouldn’t be your title. however, if you compare the two throughout the essay, then the proposed title is perfectly fine (if a little cheesey).</p>
<p>what is the thesis?</p>
<p>Thesis:
Reminiscent of Mr. Jekyll and Mr, Hyde, his clashing emotions of rash decision-making, wittiness, and superficiality make this a truly fascinating masterpiece. </p>
<p>How’s this?
An Analysis of an Eligible Bachelor from Verona
lol its cheezy, but eye-catching?</p>
<p>Rash decision-making, wittiness, and superficiallity are not emotions.</p>
<p>^ Agreed. Nobody feels “rash decision-making.”</p>
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<p>Just a few quick tips… like others have said, rash decision-making, wittiness, and superficiality are not emotions… maybe you could substitute “character traits”, or maybe just cut it out.
And it should probably be “make HIM a truly fascinating masterpiece”.
Also, unless I’m very mistaken, it’s DR. Jekyll.
This last is truly just a stylistic choice, but I would suggest putting “Mercutio” instead of “his” in the beginning… it always helps to name the subject in the thesis.</p>
<p>I’m sorry… I know you weren’t asking for advice on your thesis, but I couldn’t help it. But on subject, I like your title idea (“An Analysis of an Eligible Bachelor from Verona”).</p>