Today i wrote my first essay

Applying to College
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<p>Anyone wants to take a look at my essay?
I’d like to hear your sugestions about it, how could
I improve it.</p>

<p>Thank You</p>

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<p>i’ll look at it</p>

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<p>I will look at it. (Please include the prompt as well.)</p>

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<p>i’ll look at it.</p>

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<p>I’ll look at it, but due to time difference you might get a reply at a weird time.</p>

<p>Could you try emailing it to me (on my profile) cause I think my CC inbox is full…</p>

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<p>I emailed you the essay</p>

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<p>I’ll read your essay</p>

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<p>I could help. нали за това са съседите:)</p>

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<p>send i’ll help</p>

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<p>i’ll critique…pm me</p>

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<p>email me if you like: <a href="mailto:kkmore@gmail.com">kkmore@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>Anyone else?</p>

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<p><a href="mailto:zedleper@hotmail.com">zedleper@hotmail.com</a></p>

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<p>Me too. PM me it.</p>

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<p>ill read it… pm me</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too, if you like.</p>