<p>well, of course it’s too long, but i can’t really pare it down.</p>
<p>my “why did you voluntarily leave school for an extended period of time” essay is a touch on the long side, about 900 words (and four photographs).
this may be overboard, but it’s the best piece of writing i’ve constructed in a long time, and it’s vital to my application. so, i guess the question is: are they gonna be really annoyed reading my grotesquely long essay? how annoyed?</p>