<p>graphic intro w/ intense/emotional story…</p>
<p>too much?</p>
<p>how graphic? my essay was pretty emotional…</p>
<p>no sex, please</p>
<p>hahahah theres not sex. there is standing outside in underwear in the snow after being thrown out of your house by younger brother, though.</p>
<p>I don’t think that’s too risque, unless you’re applying to a conservative Bible college or something.</p>