Transfer Admissions Essay for Student who took a break

Hello,

I have been out of school for several years and I am in the process of applying to school for next fall. I have not been in an academic setting for a while and I was hoping that someone could read my college admissions essay and offer advice or critique it. Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you!

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