Transfer Essay Edit

College Essays
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<p>Hello, </p>

<p>I am a freshman at a large state university looking to transfer to a more competitive school. I would really appreciate it if someone could look over my common application essay. I’m a little unsure if my topic sends the right message… It’s about how I’ve gained more confidence in college than I ever had in high school. </p>

<p>Any comments or suggestions are welcome!
Thank you so much!</p>

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<p>Anyone? Please… I would be willing to return the favor.</p>

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<p>I can help you out. I’m also applying to transfer schools though (but for different reasons than you stated), if that makes a difference in whether you want me to read your essay.</p>