Hello.
I am a student at a university in New Jersey. I am anticipating a transfer to a more propitious school. And the schools happen to be extremely competitive. I have submitted my applications to 5 schools: Stanford (I am attending summer session there in June), Cornell, Yale, Johns Hopkins and University of Pennsylvania.
I have a stressful life as a college student, and my undying willingness to transfer out is adding to that stress; which also happens to my posting this discussion at 2:30 A.M.
Here is a version of my academic and activities’ profile:
Had an equivalent of a 4.00 GPA in my high school in India.
Have a perfect GPA in my freshman year so far, made Dean’s List and pursued and still pursue 2-300 level courses. I am an honors student also.
I have theoretical research under my Professor of Astronomy. I have a high leadership of just one club (that promotes STEM education in students in several ways); however, I introduced tutoring in physics for the club. And I tutor high school students twice a month in my university. I also work part-time as a teaching assistant for lab periods and act as an exam proctor for the department of physics at my school 5hrs/week
I also used to write articles for the school magazine and the newspaper, until I didn’t this semester. However, I wrote several articles pertaining to several issues and advances in the sciences, and yet got turned for any leadership position.
I only mentioned my city-based magazine reporting and a student exchange program to a European school, however, refused to pursue the latter in the future - for my high school extracurriculars.
And most importantly, I worked very hard on my essays on the Common Application. I was as succinct as possible and felt myself that I was putting down convincing reasons to transfer and pursue my intended major(s) of ASTROPHYSICS/ COSMOLOGY
Yet, my SAT scores aren’t exceptional and only average. I have strived to master the English language, but my scores on Standardized tests have severely challenged that process. And I consider this to be a blot on my application.
Besides getting accepted, getting the maximum possible financial aid is also imperative. My family earns 20,000$ equivalent, and cannot afford to obtain any other loans from my native country and my primary sponsor cannot offer more than 15-16000$ the next academic year and henceforth. Plus, I just obtained a Social Security Number, and obtaining a loan from the U.S is proving to be difficult.
It may be ridiculous to post my achievements and basically ask everyone to evaluate my progress, yet I wish to gather more opinions from other seniors who have gone through a similar process or an academic in the field of education.
Thank you for your feedback.