<p>transitioning between the two,
in the first para i told what can the uni offer me, </p>
<p>so now in the second I have to tell what I can offer it.
What should be the word to transition.
should it be “Morever” or what? </p>
<p>the first sentence of the paragraph is </p>
<p>“Transition Word”, my rich volunteering experience would prove to be useful…</p>
<p>fill the transition word.</p>
<p>A transition sentence? something along the lines of “I feel I could harness these myriad opportunities in many ways as illustrated by some of my present and recent-past activities. Since xxxx I have been volun…”</p>
<p>It can be hard to pull it out of you and on to paper- I feel for you. All I can say is Better you than me! Good luck with the struggle! And I like “URG”! Maybe you can use it in your essay somewhere? :)</p>
<p>If you want just one word, how about Lewis Carroll’s “Contrariwise”? You are shifting gears, not “Moreovering” into greater depth.</p>
<p>Or how about: “So that’s how you guys rock! I rock in many ways, too! Let me share a few with you. Ready? I have volun…”</p>
<p>As a student at “Name of College”, my rich volunteering experience would prove to be useful…</p>
<p>@ItsJustSchool another thing. </p>
<p>a better substitute for the phrase.
‘abundant power shortages.’</p>
<p>specially for abundant</p>
<p>frequent and unpredictable power outages. Inconsistent availability of power.</p>
<p>I need to stop. Go into your English teacher and see if s/he will give it a read! Or contact a senior from last year who is now in college.</p>
<p>@ItsJustSchool thanks a lot man!</p>
<p>Tragedy is that my english teacher didn’t get time to proofread my essay for me and now I am trying to do it all by myself, at the last moment. Yeah, Applying EA.
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<p>thanks though!</p>
<p>An application essay is more conversational. You don’t necessarily need a transition word. Make the transition in the same way you would shift to a new subject if you were speaking to a friend or a teacher.</p>
<p>@DreamSchlDropout - very sage advice. </p>