<p>I want to write about my transformation when I mvoed across the United States from CT to CA from a shy anti-social nerd to a publicly speaking, outgoing person who contributes to conversations etc. i also want to metnion the effect having a fraternal twin brother has had in terms of hard work, competition, etc. thoughts?</p>
<p>i was also thinking about doing it from the perspective of god/father time in hte beginning, kind of like a montage, so it clearly illustrates the transformation. but maybe not.</p>
<p>I think juxtaposing your personality against your twin’s could be effective at describing your transformation, so long as you stay away from a superficial dichotomy. </p>
<p>I don’t entirely understand your father time idea…</p>
<p>Dang. I was going to write one about my twin…maybe it’s not so creative.</p>