Turning in my UC Essays soon! Proofreading appreciated!

<p>The first prompt I talk about how my world of being a twin, a son of divorced parents, and a victim in my violent community influenced my commitment toward higher education.</p>

<p>The second prompt talks about my experience as a member in Asian Club and later on taking on the position of a leader to carry out the process of making a shirt.</p>

<p>Please post and I’ll PM back! Thank you!</p>

<p>PM me. I’ll be on for the next half hour or so.</p>

<p>Anyone else want to help proofread!</p>

<p>I’ll read. I’m also still working on my essays. -_-</p>

<p>Just need some last minute readers to catch any mistakes and proofread! Thank you!</p>

<p>I’m 80 words over the 1000 word count limit. Can I get someone’s perspective on what to cut down on and maybe a run in proofreading?</p>

<p>Anyone willing to give a last proofreading run? Thank you.</p>

<p>Busy at this point, but how did you do on your essay after I suggested the edits? You never responded back to me XD</p>

<p>I’ll see what I can help you with. :slight_smile:
PM me!</p>

<p>Okay sent! Thank you!</p>