Two versions of roommate essay - help me pick one?

<p>The title says it all! Would anyone be willing to read my two slightly different versions of the roommate essay and narrow it down? I'm happy to do revision and work them together more - I'm very open to feedback. I'll PM them to anyone who can help me out (:</p>

<p>Actually, now I have three versions... I promise that they aren't tough reading though, and two are pretty similar except for a paragraph - all share elements with each other.</p>

<p>i'll take a look</p>

<p>If you need another person, I'll be glad to take a look :]</p>

<p>pm me if you want me to read it.</p>

<p>I can take a look, if you still need someone</p>

<p>ill take a look</p>

<p>I can take a look, too!</p>

<p>PM me too!</p>

<p>me too! :D eggciting.</p>

<p>Send them over.</p>

<p>Willing to help!:)</p>

<p>Sure, just pm me.</p>