U of R supplements

<p>I am an international student and really need a feedback on my essay for U of Richmond, since my english teacher won't read it :\ The topic is "Tell us about an experience in which you left your comfort zone. How did this experience change you?"
Any feedback would be helpful!</p>

<p>Guys, I really need someone to read it and give me a feedback! Please:)</p>

<p>I'll read it, pm me</p>

<p>I'll read it</p>