UC Berkeley Freshman College of Engineering Appeal 2019

I am currently appealing to UC Berkeley Engineering, here are my stats:

GPA: ~3.9 UW
SAT: High 1400s
Coursework: Significant Amount of High Level STEM Courses
Essay: I wrote about my struggle and desire to attend the school.
If I don’t get in I might consider attending SJSU/SFSU or Community College.

Any suggestions on what to put on essays?

Did you get in?

No lol