<p>So I have written my long UC essay on topic # 2 - contribution
I was wondering if my layout would work… or if its too scientific/technical?</p>
<p>I start talking about my experience as a peer tutor, and certain challanges I faced- briefly. Then I say how one specific student asked me a questions regarding biology/physio which really just triggered my curiosity and how I went into researching that topic (related to oncology) and what I found. Then how I want to continue this in college/career…</p>
<p>Would that work or should it be more along the lines of a story?? should it have a thesis/be structured, or just flow?? HELP I’m STUCK</p>