<p>Can someone please review my essay? I’m extremely worried that it’s very cliche because of the “hunger for knowledge” angle… but it’s truly the thing that defines me, all I do is read articles and books and learn new things, and I’m extremely passionate about it. Just post here if you’re interested please and I’ll PM you the essay.
I can read yours if you want me to.</p>
<p>I can help</p>
<p>I’d gladly read it :)</p>
<p>Sure!</p>
<p>You got it 
Be careful about whom you send your essay to.</p>
<p>My essay was also from the angle; I got into all the UC’s (except riverside and merced-- didn’t apply)</p>
<p>Thank you for being interested, I’ve already recieved help and I’ve submitted my application, thanks!</p>