UC Essay Promtp 1

<p>Hey CC! I finished my UC Prompt 1 essay, but I’m having trouble coming up with transitions. Can anyone critique it?</p>

<p>No problem, PM it over!</p>

<p>PM me. I’ll give you some feedback.</p>

<p>Sure I will read it for you.</p>

<p>yeah i think i can help you out with that.
send it over =)</p>

<p>Sure. You can email me at <a href="mailto:sangars6@gmail.com">sangars6@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>Hi~</p>

<p>I will read your personal statement. PM me!</p>

<p>Sure I’ll read over it and help with the transititions
E-mail me at <a href=“mailto:NKunkel@ucsd.edu”>NKunkel@ucsd.edu</a> or pm me</p>

<p>BUMP unique topic :]</p>