UC essay!!! Who has soem spare time?

College Essays
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<p>If you have spare time I would greatly appreciate it if any one would read and critique my UC prompt #1</p>

<p>Pm me!</p>

<p>I’ll be glad to correct anyones personal statement </p>

<p>thank you
with great appreciation
-pacers</p>

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<p>I have time! PM.</p>

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<p>Hey,</p>

<p>I can read and critique your personal statement. PM it over ! :)</p>

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<p>Haha congratulations. Sure I will read it.</p>

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<p>sure i can help yah. send it over =)</p>

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<p>Hahah Send it to me. I’m like one of the best critiquers(my own word). Here let me prove it to you. </p>

<p>“I would greatly appreciate it if any one would read”<--------You see that quote that you wrote. Its not “any one” its “anyone”. Combine them.</p>