UC Personal Statement #1

<p>Hey I am planning on applying to a few uc schools, my top ones are berkely and LA. it would mean alot if you would read my first essay and give me honest feedback on what you think of it and what i should change.
Thanks, it would mean the world to me if you did.
tell me and i will pm you it!!</p>

<p>PM me and I'll gladly read it. My top schools are LA and Berkeley as well.</p>

<p>I'll read it. Working on my statements as well.</p>

<p>pm me and i will</p>

<p>I will critique it, just pm it to me</p>