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<p>It is a well written essay, but I would think that a lot of people that go to CC are in a similar (but not identical) situation as you. The majority of CC students will have gone through the “transformation” that you have. </p>
<p>Also, I would not blindly post my essay on any public platform - especially with UC application due date quickly closing in. Anyone could steal this essay and post it as there own. I would advise you to delete this post and look for trustworthy readers/editors on college confidentials College Essay forum.</p>
<p>thank you for notifying me of that</p>