UC Personal Statement Prompt 1

<p>The prompt says to describe your world and how it has affected your dreams and aspirations.
Is it appropriate and unique to write about how my family’s healthy lifestyle (proper diet, food education) has changed my health and outlook and inspired me to pursue a career in which I can inform and ultimately save or change people’s lives?</p>

<p>That is definitely appropriate; I am writing about how my father’s job as a police officer and the exposure I’ve had to the legal system because of it has inspired me to pursue a career as a lawyer. (The topic was approved by my English teacher who has helped with hundreds of UC essays and had students be very successful in admissions. As yours sounds very similar, I think you’re all good).</p>

<p>oh ok thanks</p>

<p>You can incoporate your healthy lifestyle as the “world” you live in. Just focus more on how you change instead of the lifestyle itself.</p>