<p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>
<p>Now I want to pursue computer science and my essay sounds very mainstream.</p>
<p>Every CS aspirant is going to talk about how they got their first computer… how they were thrilled by it, etc etc.
also the joy they felt when they worked their first program …</p>
<p>How can I make my essay sound unique and also focussed?
Right now my draft seems like I’m aimless. I don’t want that to come across as a character trait.</p>