<p>If I write about an accomplishment (getting 1st place in something) and
how it changed me into a confident risk
taker and those are the qualities I will bring to the UC’S will that be ok? I will show why I won’t just put “it changed me into a confident risk taker.”
It affected me by: teaching me teamwork skills and strategy, and making me more confident, plus the risk I took pulled off.
Ok?</p>
<p>It could work. Can you link the 1st place prize with anything else you want to do in life?</p>
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It could work. Can you link the 1st place prize with anything else you want to do in life?</p>
<p>I want to be a creative director/ film director which requires working with a team and leadership, and my accomplishment was winning a competition of laser tag,
which is due to the fact that my team worked well under my leadership.</p>
<p>Does that sound like it can be linked together? I’ve never won anything in film, so I can’t lie and say I have. I don’t enter completions.</p>
<p>Ya if you can link them together it’ll work. Like they say, the devil is in the details.</p>
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<p>Alright thank you for response. Now I can start outlining and eventually write.</p>