Unconventional essay - will it work?

<p>One of my creative writing pieces with a twist. Let me know!
It's short, <400 words</p>

<p>I prefer readers/editors who are not applying to colleges this year.
Be as brutal and specific as you wish,</p>

<p>please.</p>

<p>I'm applying this year to college, but my essay also has a rather literary feel to it, and I've been way too brutal with myself about it. If you want me to, I can have a look at it.</p>

<p>i'm not applying for four more years! lol i'd love to read it and be as brutal as possible!</p>

<p>I can read it if you would like. Just PM it to me.</p>

<p>PM it to me too. Just for an added 'dad' opinion.</p>