Unusual essay in need of refinement

College Essays
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<p>I’m done with UC Prompt #1 and could use some honest feedback on the essay’s flow, meaningfulness and overall deliverance.</p>

<p>Halfway done with Prompt #2 and need to know where that is headed too</p>

<p>PLEASE!</p>

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<p>Anyone?..</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you read mine.</p>

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<p>Sure, pm me.</p>

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<p>Pm sent a couple min ago</p>