<p>Could someone please tell me this is a good one and if i have answered the prompt correctly.(if there are any grammatical errors please do mention it, i am an international student.)…Thanks</p>
<p>I’ll give you some feedback.</p>
<p>sent.
Anyone else??</p>
<p>Anyone else???</p>
<p>i’ll read it!
and I promise I won’t steal it because I’ve already applied to the UofA 
hopefully we’ll both get in to the honors college since you’re writing the essay haha</p>
<p>sent it…hopefully we will!!</p>
<p>Anyone elses help would also be appreciated!</p>
<p>Bump please anyone else?</p>