Urgent- please read and comment before I submit my applications

College Essays
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<p>I attended a Jewish school my entire life and have always had a dual curriculum. I’m including this in the additional writing section of the common app. Does the following sentence make it sound like the 12 years I spent learning Hebrew studies were for nothing? Thank you.</p>

<p>Although I have a double curriculum in both Hebrew and English studies, I reported only my English classes, as my Hebrew studies are based on religion and will have little effect on my future secular education.</p>

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<p>It does sound like it was for nothing. If the major you are applying for isn’t related to your religion, I suggest putting that fact there instead of “little effect on my future secular education”</p>