Urgent: Yale SCEA extracurricular query

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>I’m applying to Yale SCEA and the application is due today. My problem is I’ve written an ultra-flowery 150 word explanation of my extracurricular activity in the section allowing for description of an EC on the common app, but I don’t know if it explains it well enough. I’m considering scrapping the current 150 word EC essay and stating the information in more direct (and more bland) terms, or even describing another activity altogether. </p>

<p>Let me know if you’re willing to advise me by reading my EC short answer and additional info!</p>

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<p>if you still need help, i’d be happy to read it
[btw, i’m an 09’er. however, i’ve already submitted all parts of my yale scea app yesterday night]</p>