<p>I saw Budlightyear’s Essay post, 1st off, I am truly sorry for your loss. I know you will live your life at SC to make her proud!</p>
<p>2nd, I wanted to post my essay to the thread. I believe it is what got me in. Enjoy reading, and hopefully future applicants will see how much time and revision you need to put in to make it a solid essay.</p>
<p>Persistence: Leading Me into My Future
As I continue into my future, I see my high school years transitioning into my early college years as a time in my life of emotional turmoil and overwhelming challenges. However, I have not let any obstacle come in the way of me striving to be the best at any endeavor that I may choose. Through hard work and persistence, I have overcame adversity and persevered along the way. I have failed just as much as I have succeeded, yet with each failed attempt I grow closer to succeeding. Likewise, Thomas Edison the inventor of the modern electric light bulb once said, If I find 10,000 ways something wont work, I havent failed. I am not discouraged, because every wrong attempt discarded is another step forward. His persistence drove him to be an influential father of todays society and illuminator of the world, literally and metaphorically. Much like Thomas Edison, I have used persistence as my fuel to overcome emotional pain, financial struggle, and stacking odds to become an influence among my peers, developing leader of our future, as well as a progressive scholar.<br>
Everything I have gained from my life, Ive had to work for, and yet I cease to complain. I truly believe the path taken with the most resistance builds ones character in the end. When I set my mind on something, I have an overwhelming knack of accomplishing whatever I am driven towards. My parents were divorced my junior year of high school, and much like most teens of divorced parents, it took an emotional toll from me. I was nervous for my future and apprehensive toward what effects my mother and fathers decision would have towards me. My father always said, Do not be the victim, which were wise words by a wise man. I decided shortly after my parents divorce, that there decision would not influence my life, goals, or passions. I knew consequences would occur from them splitting up, however, none of them would hinder me from me becoming the man I strive to be in this world; a highly dedicated individual who will achieve great things, but always put others before himself. After all, I believe the legacy and impact we make on people will be the only thing we leave to our future generations. My goal was to follow in my fathers footsteps and attend a university, and one day, be a fellow Trojan along with him.
Financial struggle was apparent after my parents subsequent divorce. I chose to live with my mother and finish up high school where I started. I knew the road to college in general and attending my college of choice, would be one of difficulty. With my emotional struggles as well as passion for ice hockey taking a toll on my grades coming out of high school, I knew an adult decision would need to be made, and drastic changes of viewing life would occur. Bernard Malamud, an American short-story writer and Novelist once quoted, There comes a time in a mans life when to get where he has to go-if there are no doors or windows he walks through a wall. For me, Bernards quoted time was mine. I knew there would be no easy road taken, and that every step along the way would be one of struggle, but resilience would lead me to the light at the end of the tunnel. I enrolled at a junior college and achieved groomed grades that would allow me to transfer into a respectable institution in the state of Texas. Spending months of my summer, on the phones with financial aid counselors and officers, and deliberate persistence of admissions, I was accepted into the first step of my journey, Texas State University, and the financial struggles of my mother were no longer evident. Tommy Lasorda, one of the most successful general managers of major league baseball once said, The difference between the impossible and the possible lies in determination. My maturity has led me to live my life thus far by this core value. Nothing is impossible with determination, commitment, and perseverance to see things through.
Although the odds have been stacked against me, I enjoy and thrive on the battle. Resilience to overcome the obstacles presented before me has led me to where I am at today, and I believe I have accomplished this with an attitude I have created myself: The day I stop striving for perfection, will be the day I am dead. My passion for learning has grown from my high school studies into my college career. I thrive on learning, and from whatever avenue I may receive it from. Lecture in class, to a textbook and even History and Discovery channel specials fuels my passion for growing as an intellectual adult.
Life, in general, is filled with ups and downs, forks in the road, and curve-balls thrown, but these variables do not faze me. My persistence to beat the odds and be the conductor of my own life has led me to be solely in control of the reigns of my future. Persistence is just one tool that I use to throttle me through aspects of my life. Yet I do not pin point one word that encompasses me. I am a well-rounded individual that has much to offer to our world in need of assistance. Like Michelangelo and his work the Sistine Chapel ceiling, I too consider myself an artist in search of his venue to paint my elaborate works on the world.</p>