I wrote about the debate between religion and essay for the “problem you’d like to solve” topic personal essay.
I know these are dangerous waters to tread in, but I’m really passionate about what I had to say, and I made the “religion” part as vague as possible. Namely I didn’t outright say what I am.
Bump, really need the advice.
At this point though, I’m pretty much locked in, unless the essay is a HUGE no no.
The debate between religion and what?
Oops, religion and science.
What do you mean by the debate between religion and science?
If you want, you can PM me the essay and I’ll comment on it. If it’s bad, it’s probably because you have overly narrow ideas of what “science” and “religion” mean, and not because you weren’t vague enough (vagueness isn’t usually good).