<p>Hey I’m a very poor writer, and my grades and SAT isnt so good, i think my essay will be the deciding factor. If you would please edit my personal experience essay. I wrote it in one hour. </p>
<p>I believe God works in the people around you, and through these people our lives are shaped and formed and pointed in a specific direction. When I moved to Okinawa I met my best friend. It was an unexpected relationship, but we couldnt have been a more perfect match. I met her at the airport the day I moved to Okinawa, Japan. We both had similar humor and similar interest so we naturally became friends. Our friendship has taught me a lot of valuable lessons.
The first thing I noticed about her is that she was a weirdo. She dressed the way she wanted to dress, she said what she wanted to say, and she did what she wanted to do without any regards to what other may think of her. She was comfortable with herself and that made her cool. So like her, I tried harder to be myself. I quite the dance crew and engaged myself full time into auto mechanics, I ate with a spoon and fork instead of chopsticks, and I openly expressed my love for Jesus. I just did whatever made me happy and life became so much more enjoyable.
Always being happy is important. Our days in this life shouldnt be wasted sitting around wishing you were happy. When my friend found out she was going to move in six months, we were devastated. For almost an entire month we sat in the dumps wishing time would just stop. We thought it was pointless to pursue anything productive. Then as we sat, I noticed some graffiti on the sea wall that read Tomorrow isnt Promised, and that reminded me that change is inevitable and that we need to live our lives to the fullest. Thats when we promised ourselves to smile every day of our lives and continue to do what makes us happy and to trust God and his ultimate awesome plans for us.
After that, we were seen every day together jumping roofs, playing guitar, and eating potato chips. We conversed for hours each night talking, debating, learning, and laughing. We were happy. We were so involved with one another that we neglected rest of the world. Our grades went down, our chores neglected, our family and friends started to think there was a serious relationship between us. Even when she moved 7,193 miles away from me, we kept in touch, it was routine: Two emails a day, and several hours of phone conversation each night/morning. This went on for a year until on December 31st 2009, New Years Eve. She called me and she told me that I made her the happiest person in the world. She said there is a world that we need to experience and that God separated us for a reason. She said we are selfish because we are not sharing our happiness with the rest of the world. I didnt want to believe it, but she was right.
Be cool, be selfless, and be happy. These are very simple lesson in life, but they are so important and my best friend reminded me of that. Be cool and youll be happy. Be happy every day. And be selfless and share the happiness. Since then we broke contact 100%. She said if God wants us to be together again, hell make a way, but otherwise well live our lives and share how awesome it was while we eat potato chips and play guitar on a roof in heaven. Experiencing a life at your school would make me so happy, and I would live each day there to the fullest, and Id share my happiness to my fellow peers. It would be a great experience to share with my best friend.</p>