Very Raw Essay

<p>Can anyone, preferably someone who has gone through the process before, please read my essay? I took a paper I wrote several years ago and edited it, but the idea is still pretty raw. I’m just afraid that I try to do “too much” and the topic is too broad. I’m also afraid of being cliche, even though I think that my idea is unique. :slight_smile: Help?</p>

<p>i’ll take a read</p>

<p>SEND IT TO ME you know u wnt to</p>

<p>Yep. I’m done with the process. :slight_smile: PM it.</p>