<p>I need to send an Email to the director of admissions because I was offered an interview. </p>
<p>Can you please PLEASE check it for any mistakes in grammer,spelling, or any other mistake. </p>
<p>This is the Email : </p>
<p>Dear Ms.********,</p>
<p>My name is ***** and Iam an applicant to the fall 2012 pre-med programme. </p>
<p>Thank you very much for offering me an interview at your campus. I have choosen my prefered date which is Tuesday, April 3, 2012 . </p>
<p>I would like to please know about the visa arrangements. As you already know, Iam Syrian living in a GCC country and I have a valid resident visa there. What are the visa procedures for me ?? Will wcmcq send me a visa or will I be able to acquire an entry visa upon arriving to Doha airport ?? </p>
<p>Thank you very much in advance. </p>
<p>Best Regards, </p>
<hr>
<p>WCMC-Q ID# : ***********</p>
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<p>Please I need it now. Thank you very very much in advance.</p>
<p>Thank you very much for offering me an interview at your campus for the fall 2012 pre-med programme. My prefered date is Tuesday, April 3, 2012 . </p>
<p>Could you please tell me what visa arrangements will be for my situation. As you know, I am Syrian living in a GCC country and I have a valid resident visa there. Will wcmcq send me a visa or will I be able to acquire an entry visa upon arriving to Doha airport.</p>
<p>First off, congtraulations on getting an interview. You need to do spell check. You have several words spelled wrong. Also, make sure that you double check your punctuation. There are several places where you don’t have space between words. Also, don’t use acronyms, spell the words out. Wishing you the best.</p>
<p>My name is ***** and I am an applicant to the Fall 2012 Pre-medical Program. </p>
<p>Thank you very much for offering me an interview at your campus. I have chosen Tuesday, April 3, 2012, as my preferred date. </p>
<p>Could you please inform me about the visa arrangements for my situation? As you already know, I am a Syrian living in a GCC country and I have a valid resident visa there. Will WCMC-Q send me a visa or will I be able to acquire an entry visa upon arriving to Doha airport? </p>
<p>I changed some of the actual text by the way, I don’t know if you like it this way haha</p>
<p>My name is ***** and I am an applicant for the Fall 2012 pre-med programme. </p>
<p>Thank you very much for offering me an interview at your campus. I have choosen my prefered date which is Tuesday, April 3, 2012. </p>
<p>I just have a few brief questions regarding Visa arrangements and would appreciate any information.I am a Syrian living in a Gulf Cooperation Council country and have a valid resident Visa there. What are the Visa procedures for me? Will WCMCQ provide me a Visa or will I be able to acquire an entry Visa upon arriving to Doha airport? Please let me know if there is a more appropriate department which I can direct my questions to.</p>
<p>Thank you very very much all. I sent the Email and I think it’s perfect because of your wonderful help.
Just wish me luck now cuz this is my top-choice and Iam thrilled that I got called for an interview. This means they are actually interested in me. Hope I get in.</p>