<p>This is the letter I wrote to UC Davis to be accepted on the waitlist if any qualified individual would read it and give me suggestions/critic that would be great! Thanks 
Also it can only be 200 words I’m at 167 right now.</p>
<pre><code>For me UC Davis has been my top choice for college since my freshman year in high school. As I continued on through my high school career I fell in love with the campus, academics, and location even more. UC Davis is the closest UC campus to my home and seeing as how I have a strong desire to stay close to my sister, I therefore did not apply to any other UC because of the distance that would have been put between my family and me.
I also know that the challenge UC Daivs offers itÂ’s students helps prepare them for jobs in the real world. At UC Davis I know I will receive the experience and knowledge to go out into the real world and be able to go above and beyond just like I always have. I know UC Davis is the college that is going to allow me to succeed in life and the one that is the right place for me.
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