<p>For a “why transfer to …” I am planning of starting with the sentence “I have seen Hell”. And then I am going to prove that with what the school has to provide. It can become protean.</p>
<p>Weak</p>
<p>Really weak.</p>
<p>You should explain what draws u to new school, not complain about what displeases u about your present school, unless it’s an issue that is common knowledge like the penn state sandusky scandal or the unc cheating scandal.</p>