What did YOU do for the $10 question?

<p>“I REALLY think you are a junior desparate for essay that worked”</p>

<p>Um…actually no. I sent in my app to JHU for Fall 2005, you can ask other people on this board or go down the threads and see if mine still exists where I posted my $10/common app essay to get other’s opinions. Also, try not to use such offensive language on this board especially since you have no idea what you are talking about. It would be totally stupid of me to use another person’s essay as my own, especially if it was submitted in the past. Think about it logically.</p>

<p>ahah i wrote this essay 10 minutes before deadline. I think I spelled half the words wrong, I really should have proofread! =&lt;/p>

<p>I wrote that I would buy some dogfood and cheap bread. I would take my chichuachua to White Rock Lake and feed the seagulls…</p>

<p>ahah, boring no?</p>

<p>Accepted BME</p>

<p>I wrote an essay about the SomethingAwful Forums.
Yes, I wrote a college essay about an <em>Internet Forum</em>.
Don’t laugh.
I got in, though. I still don’t know what the f___.
I’ll post it if anyone wants to see it.</p>

<p>I thought SA cost $20 now? I know when I used to use it, it was only $9.99.</p>

<p>i said i would go back to early 20th century so my 10 bucks would be like 200 today…and then have lunch and dinner w/ Monroe and Presley, among others</p>

<p>pmugowsky - that’s cool! what did you write about the forums?</p>

<p>I wrote about going to the 99 cents store and buying 10 things to give to frends and famly.</p>

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sup goonie goon?</p>

<p>now that i got in i don’t feel embarrased to post the subject of mine :D. it was about spending a day cooking some dishes from my native country and it was written in journal form (written as i was doing it).</p>

<p>It was about the Tsunami, but since I wrote it literally 2 hours before the deadline, I don’t quite remember the details. I swear it was the WORST college application essay I wrote this year. It had so many awkward sentences and grammar errors that I’d probably feel embarrassed reading it right now.</p>

<p>Well, somehow i was accepted BME.</p>

<p>got into BME on incoherent essay, done 5 min before deadline!</p>

<p>Maybe JHU didn’t read the $10 essays?! that would explain a lot ;)</p>

<p>JHU not reading the $10 dollar essay?..You’ve got to be joking me. The essays are an integral part of admissions at Hopkins. I think you were exaggerating when you said you finished 5 minutes before the deadline. :&lt;/p>

<p>i’m sure they read the essays, but i really don’t think they’re as integral as everyone makes them out to be. what you did for the 4 years of your high school life is much more important than one measly essay. if the essays mattered that much i’m sure i (and paulhomework, wickedwildthang, and others) wouldn’t have been accepted. :D</p>

<p>mmm if you want to read my essay, go for it…
i am not exaggerating in the least</p>

<p>ahaha this essay embaresses me</p>

<p>Meh…since decisions are out, I’d be happy to read what you guys came up with. I’ll post mine up too.</p>

<p>While walking through the halls on a normal day of school, it was impossible for me to overlook the amount of dull faces passing by. Welcome to Hershey, highly regarded as the most boring town in Central Pennsylvania by the student body. During my five years living in this little chocolate bubble, it’s easy to witness the lack of interaction we have with the outside world. So students complain about the lack of a social gathering place outside of school. However, a few of us know a small coffee shop cleverly secluded between a supermarket and a veterinarian center. To high school students, the Harbor House Café is the gathering place for long hours of study or relaxation amidst a cozy atmosphere.</p>

<p>One day after school, Andrew stopped me in the noisy halls and invited me to the Harbor House to listen to a live gig of his unnamed band. With my mind clouded in boredom and stress, I swiftly agreed and raced out to his car in the parking lot. Andrew, with his arms full of books and a guitar case, stumbled a few steps as he cautiously lifted the trunk only to fling all of his belongings inside. </p>

<p>The five-minute car ride was filled with mindless gossip of anything from past musical rehearsals to tomorrow’s Biology test. As we pulled up in the parking lot of the small, auburn colored building, I helped Andrew with his guitar case as we walked towards the entrance way. I took notice of the familiar blue sign that read “Harbor House” bolted on the front panel. As we approached the entrance, a couple swung open the door and a warm aroma of and espresso grazed by cheeks. I sprinted in and abruptly shut the door behind Andrew to shield the customers inside from the cold winter air. Inside, my body was immediately greeted by the rich atmosphere. Looking outside, the rest of Hershey was nothing more than a cold and savage world. </p>

<p>The inside of the café was no bigger than the first floor of my house. As I walked to the corner of the room to help Andrew connect his amp, I looked around at the five or six people quietly conversing over cups of coffee. The room had such a relaxing atmosphere. The delightful peach colored walls were covered with various paintings of fruit baskets and portraits. There was a red and blue rug in the center of the room accompanied by a couch to give it a nice at-home feel. Along the side of the room was a neat arrangement of cushioned stools with a Macintosh computer in the far corner open to public use. There was even a fireplace with a roaring flame, comforting the freezing guests as they scrambled for warmth.</p>

<p>After the initial setup and sound check, I was greeted by the additional two members of Andrew’s band, Robert and Max, who played the drums and electric bass, respectively. While they were warming up, I plopped myself on the tan and leather couch and admired the tranquility of the scene. In a matter of minutes, Andrew’s band began with a cover song of Coldplay’s Yellow. As soon as the song began, I was soaked into the amazing acoustics of the small room. I could hear every little detail including Andrew’s fingers against his guitar strings while his voice resonated across the room. The drums and bass nicely complemented the guitar and vocals as the room filled with music. A few guests stopped conversing and looked up only to be entranced in the melody. After several other songs from various artists including Coldplay, Incubus, Dave Matthews, and Flutter, Andrew’s band concluded and thanked the listeners and proceeded to pack up their instruments. Having enjoyed the show thoroughly, I graciously dug through my pockets. Finally, after unearthing a pile of lint and paper, my hands fell on a creased $10 bill at the bottom. I rose from the couch and walked to the counter as I unfolded the bill. Behind the counter, the workers were all Hershey High students. The employees gave me a warm greeting as I set the $10 bill on the counter and bought coffee for the band members and a Kiwi Slush for myself. Only I would ever think of ordering something freezing in this weather. The exhausted band came over and took their coffee and thanked me in the process. Thanks to the relaxing atmosphere of the café, Andrew’s music, and the Kiwi Slush that danced on my tongue ended the afternoon on a relaxing note. I helped my friends move their belongings into their cars and we drove home. In less than a year, when I attend college in a big city, I can only ponder of what my life was like in this little hamlet. Though my future will be very different from now, I will never forget about the sweet parts of life in Hershey. Namely, this small secluded café in the middle of nowhere.</p>

<p>I wrote mine about going to an Irish dance competition.</p>

<p>I did a picture “montage” of me hitchhiking to Chicago and going to a Cubs game (Left Field…of course…No Cubs’ fans?)…it was set up like the MasterCard Priceless commercials (I know…not very original…Oh well, I got in!)</p>

<p>this is what someone from my school wrote. he had a 1550 SAT and JHU rejected him.</p>

<p>said i’d buy a book.
went for a creative adventure, immersed in the book. i imagined myself as another character in the book.</p>