What do you think makes for a more effective campaign speech?

[stressedouttt]

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It works well if you’re good at it, because high school students are shallow and will vote for the person who looks better or can make them laugh more.

that’s not really a high school exclusive problem…</p>

<p>that speech sounds a tad cliche to me, to be honest</p>

[stressedouttt]

<p>

It works well if you’re good at it, because high school students are shallow and will vote for the person who looks better or can make them laugh more.

that’s not really a high school exclusive problem…</p>

<p>that speech sounds a tad cliche to me, to be honest</p>

[Propinquity]

<p>If you’re talking about the one I wrote, well, that’s fine…
How would I improve it? I’m looking for advice.</p>

[collegeluva101]

<p>^It is a very well written speech. Keep in mind, however, that these are high school students you are talking to. I think that shortening the speech a bit would have been better, so that you still have your audience’s attention in the end, would have been better.</p>