What do you think of this topic ?? PLEASE HELP .

<p>So hi all ,
I'm applying to a pre-med program and the essay that I should write is a story that happened to me that shows who iam and why do I want to study medicine .</p>

<p>What do you guys think of this topic :</p>

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<li>Talking about the experience that I had while volunteering in an a children Autism centre and the experiences that I had with them and how I want to be a doctor to help children like this .</li>
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<p>is it a good one ?? I have some other topice in my mind but I thought this would be the best among them .</p>

<p>Thank you very much for taking time to read this and any opinion will be appreciated :)</p>

<p>No help ?? :(</p>

<p>yawn... </p>

<p>Typical "why i want to be a doctor" essay. Show me something new. If you can't, make sure to make yours stand out.</p>

<p>" yawn " that was harsh :S</p>

<p>Anywayzz , I appreciate your opinion , thank you very much .</p>

<p>Anyone else ??</p>

<p>I think it can be ok as long as you continuously add specific details that help you stand out from the pack.</p>

<p>Topic you selected is good.
In this topic you can share your live experience and what you acquainted, with people. Try to come up with new ideas and make it intriguing.</p>

<p>^^ thanx all (:</p>

<p>Bump bump , anyone else ??</p>

<p>Please also what do you think of this one :</p>

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<li>Learning English by myself without a great help from school and how the Education system that iam in is terriable And offers very few EC's yet I managed to develop myself and participate in EC's and provide better education for me by reading at home and all that . </li>
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<p>What do you think is better ?? This one or the one about the Autism kidz ??</p>

<p>Bump bump bump</p>

<p>You never want to trash anyone (including your school) in your essays. They will know that based on your counselor's school report; they already will know what your school offers/doesn't. Dont waste your essay on that idea, not to mention a lot of kids go to bad schools and still end up smart. </p>

<p>I really like the first topic better</p>

<p>I think you alredy know that plenty of pre-meds refer back to some life changing experience with the ill or disadvantaged. You have to be careful with what I call the "poor orphan" essay. Or, here, poor autistic kids; they inspired me so much. And, working with them could have just as easily inspired you to be a teacher, psychologist, social worker or work for a non-profit social agency. </p>

<p>Choice two, nope. Listen to stewta4.</p>

<p>Alright thank you very very much all , your opinions were very useful .</p>