<p>I’ve seen different approaches, such as</p>
<p>Enumerating each example in separate sentences</p>
<p>“On 2 occasions, the Confederate army used deception in an attempt to overthrow the more powerful Union Army. Also, in literature, Jay Gatsby uses deception to win over his true love”</p>
<p>Listing the examples in one sentence</p>
<p>“Both the Confederate army and Jay Gatsby show that deception can have benefits.”</p>
<p>General statements</p>
<p>“Deception does not offer the same long term benefits that honesty does”</p>
<p>"In both literature and history, deception has proved to be valuable. </p>
<p>I understand that the writer has the liberty to approach the thesis in a variety of ways, but are certain approaches better than others?</p>