Which essay is better? 2 possibilities for the Common App

College Essays
1

<p>The first one is written with a larger focus on style and professionalism, while the second one is more informal and less scholarly, but has a greater emphasis on content and is 200 words shorter.</p>

<p>Which one is better? You decide.</p>

2

<p>send them over</p>

3

<p>PM them to me.</p>

4

<p>let’s see :)</p>

5

<p>I’ll read them and throw in another vote.</p>

6

<p>The shorter one for sure, though I’d be happy to look.</p>

7

<p>PM me too :)</p>

8

<p>I prefer the first one, but it’s better to take a look</p>

9

<p>email to me please.</p>